Some scattered memories.....
A lonely shade of gray
Behind those melting skies
That drop of tear
Hiding stealthily in your eyes
Would haunt me
today, tomorrow
for a lifetime....
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Wish I could reach inside
And wipe them all away
Your pains, your sorrows
And all your gloomy days
Reach deep down
And borrow, just for a day
All that hurts so bad
All that, tears you away....
posted by El enigma @ 7:05 PM
19 Comments:
wow! beautiful enig. nice usage of word tears :)
enig!
the first half was exquisite... i felt the second half wasn't upto it... i don't know why, but maybe bcos I thought the first half is self-contained... with the second half, it loses that...
but then, poems are written bcos something screams within, many times... so criticism misses the point...
keep writing,
asuph.
lovely enig! been waiting for a nugget like this from u for a long time now - u didn't disappoint!
ano
Ahhh...heart ached to read this.
Priya.
thanx guys....this was written on a really gloomy day...so, it might be to some extent incomplete or incoherent...
but isn't that how life is sometimes....always that lingering step short of being complete or perfect or contained in itself..
enig!
Chocolate therapy is in order :)
absolutely wonderful!
Where was this poetess in all these years? Do write more, my most enigmatic friend:)!
awesome photo El! though dunno why, i checked the pic again and noticed that the 'grey' isnt so lonely :s aie...
Great to read from you again after so long.
hey crys...who's going to order it? :)
thanx fizo, glad u liked it!
Vivek, I was around u, how did u miss me :)
louve...thanx...ya, maybe it was not so lonely afterall...depends on what memories u associate with it, na :) got ur email, will write to u sometime this weekend...take care!
enig!
Sigh!Hope the pouring of words have helped :) Luv the angle of picture..fits the dizzying heart!
thanx rama :) glad u liked it!
hey swanima....thanx a ton! ya, funny thing this pain is....to let it all go, u have to feel it once in its totality....but all of it lasts, only till a bright sunny morning....here's wishing u lotz of such mornings :)
take care
enig
the verses and that beautiful pic go so well together. :) you have some talent lady!
thanx neets, glad u liked it :-)
enig!
Ooh that was some breathtaking picture. Whoever it was that took it. Lovely one. Equally adorable was the poem. Well written. Sometimes, the incompleteness lends completion to the poem, paradoxical though it may be. And here, it does.
thanx individualist! glad u stopped by...and ofcourse, I took the pic :)
enig!
hey enig!
i notice uve been writing not much either?
about time?
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ouch.. you know just where it hurts..
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